Pitch And Crit
Things to change to my video demonstration
- Add heart beating after the wrist band is shown
- when the mouse comes in and clicks the submit button, perhaps add in a computer screen to fill out the space
- The flag at the end needs something else added to it, perhaps a silhouette of a crowd of people in the background.
- when the phone app is counting through the minutes, have a silhouette of people exercising in the background
- add department of health logo to the screen of the phone app
- pillow fight scene needs to look like the feathers are coming out of the pillows more
- speed up the narrative voice over, make it sound more enthusiastic
- change the characters eyes so they aren't staring straight at the audience.
