Illustration with improvements 

New version

After looking at different styles of illustrations I realised the image needed more detail. I made the most of zooming right into the image so I could concentrate on the little bits of detail. once zoomed out, these subtle changes made all the difference. I also took off the heavy black edges and replaced them with subtle colours.  

First draft

This was my first attempt at illustrating the artwork for my storyboard. although I was happy with mu first attempt, it did not look quite right. all the lines are too straight and everything has a gradient which looks to digital.